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Mae Govannen's avatar

Lovely, Mr. Josh! 😊 I especially like your lines:

"In its beak is an olive branch

And in its eyes are light,

And in its wings are peace and hope..."

It shows your true poet's instinct that at the touch of your pen the word "and" becomes not mere filler, but a syllable of power to urge along the meter and build anticipation. Deftly written - bravo!

Gary Wait's avatar

Josh -- this is spiritually inspiring and linguisticly beautiful. I'm not so good at memorizing poetry as when younger, but this is well worth the effort!

" ... Say something we can learn by heart,

And when alone repeat... "

(Robert Frost)

And, of course the passage from Luke with which you prefaced it is well fixed in my mind and heart.

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