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Alexander Birch's avatar

So whimsical and lovely! I love the image of the silver light coming in under the door, and the stars singing is lovely. I’ve used that concept in a poem I’m working on as well!

Excellent rhythm as well. :)

Mae Govannen's avatar

Such a tender, sweet story! To think that our words may hold power, even if we're certain they are doomed to lifelessness. This reminds me of a quote from Kate DiCamillo:

"It was dangerous to allow yourself to believe that what you said directly influenced the universe.

But sometimes it did, didn't it?"

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